How to use this checklist
Concise
Every word has a distinct job
Every word has a distinct job
- No filler words like “basically”, “actually”, “just”
- Each word adds meaning or clarity
- Can’t remove words without losing meaning
High information density in minimal words
High information density in minimal words
- Maximum meaning per word
- Efficient phrasing
- No redundancy
40-60 characters per line
40-60 characters per line
- Optimal line length for readability
- Breaks appropriately for scanning
- Not too long (causes focus loss) or too short (causes back-and-forth eye movement)
Short sentences and paragraphs
Short sentences and paragraphs
- Less than 3-4 lines per paragraph
- Sentences vary in length but average ~15-20 words
- Broken into scannable chunks
Front-loaded with signal words
Front-loaded with signal words
- Most important words come first
- Action words at start of sentences
- Users see key information immediately
Ideas ordered by priority
Ideas ordered by priority
- Most critical information first
- Secondary details follow
- Nice-to-know information last
Purposeful
User goals are clear and supported
User goals are clear and supported
- Text helps users complete their task
- Addresses user’s “why am I here?” question
- Removes barriers to action
Business goals are met
Business goals are met
- Supports conversion, engagement, or retention
- Aligns with product objectives
- Advances organizational goals
Brand voice is reflected
Brand voice is reflected
- Consistent with brand personality
- Recognizable as coming from this product
- Uses appropriate tone for context
Value proposition is evident
Value proposition is evident
- User benefit is clear
- Explains “what’s in it for me?”
- Shows value before asking for action
Subject matter focuses on user benefit
Subject matter focuses on user benefit
- Written in second person (“you”)
- Emphasizes outcomes, not features
- User-centered, not company-centered
Active, inviting framing
Active, inviting framing
- Motivates action without being pushy
- Matches user’s intention and journey stage
- Appropriate level of urgency
Conversational
Natural, spoken language
Natural, spoken language
- Sounds like something you’d say aloud
- Flows naturally when read
- Not stiff or overly formal
Active voice predominates
Active voice predominates
- Subject performs the action
- Direct and energetic
- Use passive only when it’s clearer (rare cases)
Connecting words included
Connecting words included
- Prepositions present (“to”, “from”, “with”)
- Articles included (“a”, “an”, “the”)
- Not telegraphic or robotic
Familiar words and phrases
Familiar words and phrases
- Uses language your users use
- Based on user research and testing
- No unnecessary technical jargon
Personality in appropriate moments
Personality in appropriate moments
- Voice shines through when context allows
- Not overly serious in light contexts
- Not playful in serious moments
Clear
Accurate action words
Accurate action words
- Specific verbs that describe the action
- “Delete” not “Remove” for permanent deletion
- “Save” not “OK” for saving changes
Command forms used appropriately
Command forms used appropriately
- Active imperative for buttons
- Clear, direct instructions
- Action-oriented language
Plain language
Plain language
- 7th grade reading level for general audience
- 10th grade for professional contexts
- Avoids complex vocabulary and sentence structures
Meaningful, descriptive titles
Meaningful, descriptive titles
- Titles tell you where you are
- Not generic or vague
- Provide context and orientation
Consistent patterns and terminology
Consistent patterns and terminology
- Same word means same thing throughout
- UI patterns applied consistently
- Terminology documented in style guide
Scoring guide
9-10
7-8
5-6
3-4
0-2
Example evaluation
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Scoring
Printable checklist
Use this condensed version for quick evaluations:Concise (0-10 each)
- Every word has a job
- High information density
- 40-60 characters per line
- Short sentences/paragraphs
- Front-loaded signal words
- Ideas ordered by priority
Purposeful (0-10 each)
- Supports user goals
- Meets business goals
- Reflects brand voice
- Value proposition clear
- User-benefit focused
- Active, inviting framing
Conversational (0-10 each)
- Natural, spoken language
- Active voice predominates
- Connecting words included
- Familiar words/phrases
- Appropriate personality
Clear (0-10 each)
- Accurate action words
- Command forms appropriate
- Plain language
- Meaningful titles
- Consistent terminology
Sum all individual scores and divide by number of criteria (22 total) for an overall 0-10 rating.